Authors note: This is a retelling of the short story dead Man's Path. I would like feed back on if I should add more detail or make it more bland.
The story "Dead Man's Path" was a story about a man Michael Obi who becomes head master at the school that he works at. Obi walked out side and realizes a path in the forest. He then decides to block the path so people can't use it anymore. Then Michael goes to the village priest and asks him for his opinion. The priest says that he should re open the path. A woman in the village dies so the villagers destroy the school thinking that it is his fault. Michael then gets a bad evaluation since the villagers destroyed the school so he gets fired.
I think that this is a very good retelling. I think it was too long for a 10 but maybe a 8. But this was a very good piece.
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